Peer Assessment

Here is the peer assessment of my two draft pages, done by two of my classmates. Once my two drafts were finished, they were shown to the students, who them gave me feedback based on what they thought of them. I've used their feedback to improve my work and changed both pages accordingly.

Student Name 1: Adelaide	How To Improve
Level/ Mark	Front Cover	Contents Page
Level 2: 35 The front cover and contents follow a consistent colour scheme of pink and yellow. The colour of the text blends well with the main picture on the front cover. The front cover artist is represented well through the use of certain fonts. For example the name of the artist is presented with pixelated font which relates to the name of the artist ‘PIXEL8’. They have used pictures well in the contents page. The pictures look inviting and they follow the features of the contents page.	Level 3: 36 In order to improve the title should be a lot cleaner. The font is good but it looks rushed and messy. For example the slits on the e and i don’t look equal. Maybe they aren't meant to be equal but I think they look out of place. The puffs on the side are positioned well however the font used doesn't exactly jump out at me like the rest of the cover does. For example the main image looks funky and crazy so the font should follow suit and blend in with the whole feeling of the cover. I would suggest using a bubble like text. Like this: THE HYPE	Level 2: 30 The colour scheme is good however maybe one colour would go well. For example, the front cover had pink, yellow and white. Maybe the contents could have a tiny bit of yellow in it. Even just the numbers on the pictures being yellow would make a difference. The numbers of features should start at about 20 because the start of the magazines is always filled with advertisements so the real part of the magazine doesn’t start till then. The magazine social websites should be at the bottom of the page because they are the least important thing.

Student Name 2: Adelaide	How To Improve
Level/ Mark	Front Cover	Contents Page
Front Cover: LEVEL 3 – MARK 45 Contents page: LEVEL 3 – MARK 46	-          Barcode smaller So you have space for more puffs or buzz words -          Buzz words in bold To catch the readers eyes with your articles -          The puffs text in a different font style	-          Page numbers for the articles